The
following information will assist you when
writing a news release for distribution
through MEEF. A well crafted press
release captures the attention of
journalists and potential customers and is
optimized for distribution over the
Internet.
Pay Attention to the Content of your Press
Release
When we talk
about content we refer to the news story you
are telling. Keep the following points in
mind when writing your press release.
Is your news
"newsworthy"? The purpose of a press release
is to inform the world of your news item. Do
not use your press release to try and make a
sale. A good press release answers all of
the "W" questions (who, what, where, when
and why), providing the media with useful
information about your organization,
product, service or event. If you read your
press release and it reads like an
advertisement, rewrite it.
Start strong.
Your headline and first paragraph should
tell the story. The rest of your press
release should provide the detail. You have
a matter of seconds to grab your reader's
attention. Do not blow it with a weak
opening.
Write for the
Media. On occasion media outlets, especially
online media, will pick up your press
release and run it in their publications
with little or no modification to what you
send. More commonly, journalists will use
your press release as a springboard for a
larger feature story. In either case, try to
develop a story as you would like to have it
told. Even if your news is not reprinted
verbatim, it may provide an acceptable
amount of exposure.
Not everything
is news. Your excitement about something
does not necessarily mean that you have a
newsworthy story. Think about your audience.
Will someone else find your story
interesting? This is a common problem. Let's
assume that you have just spent a lot of
effort launching a new online store.
Announcing
your company's opening is always an exciting
time for any business, but the last thing
the media wants to write about is another
online store. This is old news and not
interesting. Instead, focus on the features
of your online shopping experience, unique
products and services. Answer the question?
Why should anyone care? (Avoid clichés such
as "customers save money" or "great customer
service".) Focus on the aspects of your news
item that truly set you apart from everyone
else.
Does your
press release illustrate? Use real life
examples about how your company or
organization solved a problem. Identify the
problem and identify why your solution is
the right solution. Give examples of how
your service or product fulfills needs or
satisfies desires. What benefits can be
expected? Use these types of examples to
powerfully communicate the benefits of using
your product or service.
If you are
reporting on a corporate milestone make sure
that you attribute your success or failures
to one or more events. If your company has
experienced significant growth, tell the
world what you did right. Show the cause and
effect.
Stick to the
facts. Tell the truth. Avoid fluff,
embellishments and exaggerations. If you
feel that your press release contains
embellishments perhaps it would be a good
idea to set your press release aside until
you have more exciting news to share.
Journalists are naturally skeptical. If your
story sounds too good to be true, you are
probably hurting your own credibility. Even
if it is true, you may want to tone it down
a bit.
Pick an angle.
Try to make your press release timely. Tie
your news to current events or social issues
if possible. Make sure that your story has a
good hook.
Use active,
not passive, voice. Verbs in the active
voice bring your press release to life.
Rather than writing "entered into a
partnership" use "partnered" instead. Do not
be afraid to use strong verbs as well. For
example, "The committee exhibited severe
hostility over the incident." reads better
if changed to "The committee was enraged
over the incident." Writing in this manner
helps guarantee that your press release will
be read.
Economy of
words. Use only enough words to tell your
story. Avoid using unnecessary adjectives,
flowery language, or redundant expressions
such as "added bonus" or "first time ever".
If you can tell your story with fewer words,
do it. Wordiness detracts from your story.
Keep it concise. Make each word count.
Beware of
jargon. While a limited amount of jargon
will be required if your goal is to optimize
your news release for online search engines,
the best way to communicate your news is to
speak plainly, using ordinary language.
Jargon is language specific to certain
professions or groups and is not appropriate
for general readership. Avoid such terms as
"capacity planning techniques" "extrapolate"
and "prioritized evaluative procedures".
Avoid the
hype. The exclamation point (!) is your
enemy. There is no better way to destroy
your credibility than to include a bunch of
hype. If you must use an exclamation point,
use one. Never do this!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Get
Permission. Companies are very protective
about their reputation. Be sure that you
have written permission before including
information or quotes from employees or
affiliates of other companies or
organizations. Any dispute resolution will
favor the other company, meaning that your
press release may get pulled.
About your
company. Your press release should end with
a short paragraph (company boilerplate) that
describes your company, products, service
and a short company history. If you are
filing a joint press release include a
boilerplate for both companies.